Sunday, 29 April 2012

Evaluation- Nicole Rawson




  1. in what ways does your media product use, develop or change forms and conventions of real media products.

 The genre for our film is mystery drama, it is mainly set in the present day however, it features flash backs to the past as part of uncovering a mystery. For our two minuet opening sequence we thought the best way to approach it would be to try and engage the viewers interest a little instead of telling them the whole film straight away. In our opening sequence we wanted people to be able to tell there was some sort of mystery involved without giving the entire plotline away all together. I think that we did this successfully as it features the uncovering of a hidden letter that falls out of some books. This is a clever way of introducing the mystery as it tells the audience there is something very important about these letters without telling them exactly what it is. We chose to make our plot non linier as it was important that the audience could make the connexions between the past and the present day very quickly otherwise the story would not probably make much sense. This could have potentially created a problem if the audience had not grasped the concept that it was a flash back however by using some clever techniques we managed to make it work successfully. To establish the changes between the two time zones we chose to use a fade in to white/fade out from white which featured a date along the bottom of the screen. This fade looked very effective as it showed a clear difference from the fade to blacks we had used for the title credits. Some of the key things we used to help the audience tell the difference between the two times where the use of camera angles, props and editing. Firstly for both places we used contrasting lighting and props that where very different from one another. An evidence of this is the use of candles, for our 1564 scene it is set very dark in comparison to the modern day. The use of candles in this scene should help the audience make a connexion that this was a very long time as no one writes by candle light any more. Compare this to the scene set in the present day in which our main character can be seen wrapping up items into boxes that have clearly been used for electrical items i.e. the Sony laptop box. 
Lighting in modern scene is allot lighter

Candle scene 





Between the two locations we have chosen to make some of the props the same to give little clues as to what’s going on and create continuity. Take for example the books, the books which are seen to be placed on the table in the modern-day are exactly the same books used in the historical shot.

This is the books in the modern scene
Books in historical scene


This leads me onto the second technique we used for distinguishing between the two time zones the use of editing and camera angles. To ensure that the audience noticed the books where the same in the two locations we made a point of including a panning shot of the books in both scenes. This may not be obvious initially however  if we where to create the full film we would have ensured that more shots similar to this would have been used to establish the connexion. One particular camera shot that I like from the opening two minuets of the film and works well is the one that has the candles in the foreground very blurred.  This shot helps to add to the mystery of the film and is very unique to our media product.

Blurred candles shot



I find that this shot draws in your attention  to try and figure out what your actually visualizing on screen. We chose to keep the editing in the two locations very similar and at a slow place as it seemed to fit the genre of our film very well, for example it wouldn’t have looked right if we had chosen to cut very quickly between many different shots in a historical scene especially since we wanted to keep the editing at a pace in time with the music. The music from our clip I think works very well as it fits the tone and mood and is exactly what we had in mind. To find the right track we had to search through lots of disks before eventually deciding on pastoral from the audio network track 1.

Our font
When choosing a text for our credits we decided that it would look good if we made them look like they had been handwritten in an old English script like the letter. To achieve this look we searched for free online fonts and decided to go with one called st Andrews queen.

This shows how our font looked in the film





One think that is different about our film opening is that we use a voice over. This type of audio is commonly used throughout films to give a brief history of a particular character or to highlight an interest in a particular item.  In the case of our film the voice over was used to highlight key phrases of the letter so that we could hint at more clues in our story line. We chose to use a voice over in our film after we noticed that it had be done in lots of other films for example confessions of a shopaholic and bride wars. Witch we had already analysed in research for our film.

This film also uses a voice over



2.How does your Product represent particular social groups?


The main social groups I think that our film represents is the young male and female genders this is because it looks into the complications of the relationships they have with one another and how they go about tackling these issues. Like the majority of films in our genre we have chosen to stick with the normal stereotypes of the characters in the film. However one thing our film does do differently is compare how the perception of this social group is different in the passed to what it is today. In the opening two minuets of our film we tried not to really create a dominate character as such because of the inkeeping with our mistery genre we achived this by the  the lack of dialogue and interaction with one another. One of the shots we have used in our film could possibly contradict this. This is the shot in witch we have a young female sat on the floor whiles another character walks passed and places book on the table. This to me creates a power argument between the two characters for several reasons. Firstly it is obvious that in the relationship of the two characters the character that walks down the stairs is the more dominant of the two represented by the fact that the camera pans up towards this character and tracks her movements across the room. This character is also higher up in the shot and above the head of the young female. The second thing that shows this character is more dominant is when we show a close up or our young girls face the character is clearly upset and has to look up to see the passing person walk passed however, the power balance is disrupted by the fact that it is the young female is on the screen a lot more than the other character whose face we don’t even see. This means that for the purpose of our storyline it is in fact the young female who will be more important and the other character isn’t really much at all.

Showing how the young girl looks up
Sowing how one character is set higher than the other however no face is seen 


 In our film we wanted the audience to be able to associate the fact that the young girl and the person writing the letter where in a similar situation to each other we did this by dressing the characters both in very dark clothing that could quite easily represent there mood. We wanted the audience to feel the stereotype that this age group feels in that they are easily isolated and feel separated from the others around them. One final thing that reflects this is the tone of the music we have used in our opening sequence it is very low in tone and slow paced creating a sad and mysterious atmosphere.


3. what kind of media institute might distribute your media product and why?

If our film was distributed it think that a fairly large and substantial company  would do this for example Entertainment distributors. The reasons for doing this are that it is quite hard for small independent film to get noticed when competing against big Hollywood blockbusters Especially since there is becoming more and more ways to watch films not just at the cinema. What we particularly liked about entertainment was that they already had a substantial collection of films they had already distributed that include both big budget Oscar winning films along with other smaller productions.

One of the companies who we thought could distribute our film



We did look at other distributors for our film including the British film council however we felt that Entertainment would probably be the better of the two. A main factor in this decision was the feedback from our questionnaire results in which it emerged that more and more people are watching films in other ways such as on demand, online or illegal downloads. This therefore meant we would have more chance of getting a larger audience to watch our film if we went with a company that did more than just  cinema releases.  Another thing that our questioners told us is that it would mainly be women who would watch our film. This means that for distribution purposes we would know how to target this type or audience. Example of this would include putting posters in women’s magazines or showing the trailer for our film along with other films of a similar genre.  Below are some images of magazines we could potentially advertise in.

Examle 1

Example 2


4. Who would be the audience for your media product. 

In order to establish who the audience for our media product would be we carried out some extensive research into the different types of film audience. The first part of this was to go online and read reviews on films with a similar genre. From this research we where able to establish a link between our type of film and women aged 15 and above as these where the type of people who gave the most positive feedback. To back this research up we then sent out a question-air asking people about several aspects of our film who they where and what other films they liked to watch. The question airs we sent out  reflected our initial research and came back with the same results the same results. After deciding on a final plot line for our film we then went onto the BBFC website to establish an appropriate certificate for our film. after great discussion we establish that it would probably be more appropriate for a 15 certificate as some parts of our film would not be appropriate for younger audiences and due to the complexity of the story line they may not have understood it properly anyway



5. How did you attract/address your audience 


To attract our target audience we thought it would be best to find out exactly what they liked. Our way of doing this was to send out some question airs and then make our film reflect there answers. It was important to us that our film was unique to other films in the hope that it would attract as many people as possible. To do this as a group we pulled together a list of ideas of ideas that would make our film stand out that included several shots and editing techniques. The first part of doing this was the application of credits to our film we wanted them to tie in with the mood of the film and reflect the genre as much as possible. Our way of doing this was to make the script look like the handwriting on the letter so that it introduced the audience to feel part of the story as this text was written specifically for them.  In our filming we used a variety of shots that would hopefully make the audience feel that they where part of our characters world. Some of the shots that do this is the montage of shots in witch the character is writing the letter. This is obviously a very private seen  but yet the audience is allowed in and is able to see and hear the deep inner thoughts of the character. The genre of our film was mystery this meant that the people who came to watch our film would want to try and solve what was going on whilst they watched. In our opening to minuets we there for felt that it was essential to put in some subtle clues that the audience could piece together . For example there is the obvious clue of the letters, but there are also some more discrete ones like the title of the books on one of the table " Treasures of Britain".

Handwritten style text


6. What have you learnt about technology from the process of constructing the product. 

For our filming we used a Panasonic HDC-HS80 which allowed us to film in HD giving a much better picture quality. This model of camera features settings for a wide range of shooting situations from close up to far away subjects making it highly appropriate for what we required it to do. This camera features a 33.7mm wide angle lense, to realize shooting at a close distance from a subject both the subject and its surrounding environment this was essential  for some of the pulling focus shots we used in our filming.

The camera we used 

Friday, 27 April 2012

Group 1 evaluation: Hazel Rushworth


Media Evaluation: Group 1: Hazel Rushworth

1: In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?

            In my group we had a tendency to stick to the general conventions of the genre in which we chose to base our film around. This genre was firstly, a romantic film; however, after many alterations to our storyline we based the film on romantic mystery, with mystery being the focal point in the opening of the film. Our films’ opening uses similar generics to National Treasure 2: Book of Secrets in which we looked at as part of the research into the mysterious openings.
The National Treasure Book Of Secrets

            The narrative style of the product is very much limited in the opening 2 minutes that we have created; however, it does begin to give an idea of the storyline towards the end of the opening section. We made the narrative to be like this as we felt it would provide more emphasis on the main characters and the emotions that are being felt. This then lead on to give the mystery letter more importance by being singled out as the main focus of the storyline. The product is non-linear, and flashes back to 1564 to when the mystery letter was written. To enhance the importance of this letter we made the flashback sequence include a monologue which was included as a voiceover as the letter was being written. We didn’t do any research into films that include flashbacks as we felt that this can be portrayed in a number of ways, and in most films is highlighted by haziness and a white filter, as we wanted the flashback to be part of the title sequence, we wanted a simple method of including a flashback, and simply included the date in the bottom right corner of a white screen.

            The sound in the product that we have created differs from other films that have a similar genre to the one we created, this is because we have used slow symbolic music throughout the entire opening sequence, where it only fades at important moments, for the bang of a table and the voiceover heard when the letter is being written. We chose the music to emphasise the mood of the scene and to make the scene more effective and realistic, other films from this genre do use music and a narrative but the main focal point is usually on the dialogue rather than on the music. The film 27 Dresses uses both music and voiceover in the opening of the film but makes the dialogue the focal point.


            The typography used in our media product, is similar to that used in similar films of the same genre. In 27 Dresses and Bride wars, the typography is very similar to one used in our product, however, this is done to appeal to the target audience of the film which is ultimately women, but, in our film, we have used a font that would look realistic on an old letter, this font emphasises the importance of the letter and tells the audience that this is an important factor in the film.

The 27 dresses type

  Overall, I think that te product that we have created uses both similarities and difference in conventions of the genre of our film and when differenced from similar films the product is still realistic and emphasises the sections of the story that are important to the rest of the film.
2: How does your media product represent particular social groups?

            I think that the majority of stereotypes are simply used in the product rather than challenged; however, we have mildly challenged the stereotype of famous, important figures in the history of the country. Abelard and Heloise are famous for the love letters that they wrote to each other, we have challenged these two figures by twisting the storyline of the letters they wrote to cover up a murder in which the committed together before they fell in love, although the couple are not entirely present in the opening section of the film we would have challenged it more as the film progressed. When representing young females, we have started to challenge the typical stereotypes in the film and would have done throughout the rest of the full length film;

            We have used camera angles in various ways throughout the opening section of the film to emphasise the stereotype that young females are seen in. One of the shots we used was close up looking slightly down on our main character; this made the feelings of the character known and made her seem inferior to the absent parent in the background. Both of these representations are following the typical stereotypes of the characters; parents having power over the young c

The sad look.
            We also used an over the shoulder shot to emphasise the mysterious character that is Abelard, writing his letter to Heloise. We made it so the audience could not see the majority of this character to emphasise the mysterious factor of the genre but also how the character is not well known and is hiding something from everyone.
the over the shoulder shot.

            The editing of our film is very slow paced, allowing time for the motions of the characters to be apparent. The editing has made the stereotype of the main character become clearer at the beginning as the numerous transitions splitting up the clips give the impression that the main character is not comfortable where she is and would be happier in a different situation.

the transitions

            Both the editing of the film and the camera shots make the main character look inferior to her peers and isolated in her home. This is also apparent in the symbolism and the iconography of the film.

            Mise – en –scene is an important factor of any film, in our film the main character is seen wearing dark clothing. This combined with the dark make-up and dark hair makes the main character look even more sad and isolated. These factors all play a part in bringing the film together in the full length version, however, it is also emphasises a number of important aspects of the opening sequence that are needed before the full length story can unfold.
The costume of the main character

     

            All the sections of the film work towards making the main character look sad and lonely, however, in the next section of the film we would have started to break the traditions of this stereotype by making small changes in her character, her becoming more confident and strong. We also would break the stereotype with this character in the full length film as she is the ‘hero’ of the story, which is usually a male role, however, because an essence of romance is also present in the film, to attract to our target audience we have broken stereotype and made the female lead the one that comes up with all the answers.



3: What kind of media institution might distribute your media product and why?

            When researching distribution companies, we looked into two main distributors which could distribute our product, we decided to look into these two distributors as they had been the distributor for some of the films that we had researched as part of our blog.

            The first company we researched was Entertainment Film Distributors; these have distributed films such as Brokeback Mountain and 17 Again. Although, these films are not necessarily in the genre of the film that we have produced, this company has a good record of distributing and is the largest distributor in both the UK and the Republic of Ireland.
the entertainment in video logo.



            The second company we researched was The UK Film Council. This company has a main aim in which they attempt to distribute non-mainstream films and make them more widely available to cinema audiences, and support the export of UK film abroad. I think that this would be good as it would allow our film a better chance of getting abroad but this company is not well known and limits the types of films in which it will be willing to distribute.
the BFI logo


            After researching these companies we decided that the best distributor for our product would be Entertainment Film Distributors. This is because we felt that we needed a more well-known company to be able to provide an extra source of advertising for our film.

4: Who would be the audience for your media product?

            Before deciding what the certificate for our film was going to be and who we were going to aim it at was discussed, we did some research into the different certificates that are given to films and why as we felt that this would help us when choosing who the film will mainly be aimed at. We decided the film would receive the certificate 15. We did this as we felt that choosing a lower certificate would restrict us too much and choosing a higher certificate would limit the audience that are able to view the film.
The 15 certificate logo



            The chosen audience for our film will be females above the age of 15. They must be above this age to be able to view the film due its certificate. I think the main group of people that go to view this film will be the younger generation as the characters in the film relate to their age range, making the film appeal to them. I also think that some of the older age range would see the film as the twist in Abelard and Heloise would make them interested into see how the story would turn out, and would make them think about the real reason the letters were written between them.
This represents the female gender.



            I don’t think that the lifestyle of a person would affect whether or not they would go and view this film, however, if they class themselves as upper-class they may be more reluctant to go and view the film as they feel the audience is aimed at lower-class people.

            The questionnaires that we produced as part of our audience research, was a good tool to use when deciding who our target audience should be. The results were very mixed but we went with the majority and women said they would like to go and view the film more than men did and therefore we chose them to be the main audience for our film, alongside young teenagers.


5: How did you attract/address your audience?

            We addressed our target audience in numerous ways, taking into consideration the research that we did on the certificates of films and the feedback that we got at the beginning of the project before the film was made. In the feedback at the opening of the project we found that older more mature people would prefer to watch the film as it included a sense of mystery and the unknown (the past), this appealed to people and therefore we decided to aim our film at this audience of 15 plus. In our film we decided that mystery was the most important factor, and included a lot of this by using little dialogue and a lot of transitions including fade to black and cross fades. In our feedback t the end of the project, people said the film included a lot of mystery and made them want to continue watching the film to find out the importance of the letter and why the young girl finds it.

            I think that we reached our target audience in numerous ways, listening to the feedback that we got from our questionnaire in the beginning of the project helped us decide the features that needed to be included in the film to keep the target market interested in the film and the storyline.




            The music played a large part in keeping the film mysterious and interesting, not including much dialogue left the audience wanting to know more and to know the truth about many aspects of the film. Also, the music set the mood of the opening section, which emphasised the emotions that were being felt by the main protagonist without her having to say anything. The camera shots and mise-en-scene also made this a success.

            The majority of the film was successful, however, on numerous occasions when the group was ready to film the second half of the film, there was problems with lack of cameras or not being able to find staff. This led the group to be sat doing very little in lessons as we had already done all the necessary things that needed to be completed before filming.  Another thing that was successful; was the filming itself.  We didn’t have any issues with weather or environmental hazards as all the filming was done at an indoors location and the weather didn’t affect the outcome of the film. One hazard we did incur however, was the candles. This became a hazard only at the end of filming when some of the wax became stuck to the table. This easily peeled off however, when the wax had hardened. This issue was taken into consideration in the risk assessment that took place before filming was allowed, and was said to not cause a risk or any harm to the people present when filming.

image of the candles

            The only issue that was raised in the audience feedback after the video was posted on the internet was that the video was too short and should be extended. This issue however, couldn’t have been improved as the brief clearly stated that the video was to be a maximum of 2 minutes long.

6: What have you learnt about technologies from the process of constructing this product?

            Many key decisions were made during all three sections of producing this product; however, one major decision stands out to me more than any. This is the decision to change the genre of our film.

            During the filming period of the film, we decided as a group that the product would be better off in the mystery genre as this was how the film was developing and the main genre that we had chosen for the film (ROMANCE)  was not evident in the film when we were producing it. Also we decided that after changing the script and the storyboard to match this genre it would be most appropriate, especially since the audience feedback we conducted at the beginning of the project stated that this was one of the most watched genres of our target market.

            Other key decisions that were made in the production of this product were the location of where the product would be filmed. We originally stated that the book would be found in an attic of an old house to make our film similar to the opening of the film ‘national Treasure@ one that we looked into and researched before deciding on the genre and the target audience to our film.

            Numerous different technologies were used at each section of production.

            In pre-production, the main technologies used included Blogger, which all of the research we produced was posted onto and plotbot, online script writing software on which we layed out the script in a professional style and could easily change the dialogue at any point.

            In production of the film, we used a Panasonic HDC HS80 to film the entire product and to transfer the film onto the macs that were used in the lessons for editing.
The camera we used.
The macs used in the lessons
      During the editing section of the production, we used a programme called Final Cut Express to edit and add music to our film. All the audio that was added to the film, except the bang of the table falling over, was from audio network.
The final cut express logo.
Audio network logo

      I have learnt to use a number of different programmes and technologies throughout the course of this project. I have been taught how to use blogger, Final Cut Express, plotbot, a Panasonic camera and the audio network Cd’s on the IMac to be able to produce the film to such a high standard. I already knew how to upload videos onto YouTube and Facebook and therefore needed no help in this area, but I learnt how to embed the videos onto my blog to help with the researching elements.

7: Looking back at your preliminary task, what do you feel you have learnt in the progression from it to the full production?

            In the preliminary task the main brief was continuity. This meant learning and following the 180 degree rule and knowing how to do match on actions and shot reverse-shot. The full brief was as follows:

“Continuity task involving filming and editing a character opening a door, crossing a room and sitting down in a chair opposite another character, with whom she/he exchanges a couple of lines of dialogue. This task should demonstrate match on action, shot/reverse shot and the 180-degree rule.”

If this task was succeeded, then the brief for the main task was:

“The titles and opening of a new fiction film, to last a maximum of two minutes.”

            I have used all the skills that I learnt in my preliminary task in the production and editing of the main task, this includes the continuity and the 180 degree rule. I feel that I have progressed in the use of these skills and now know how to correctly put these into action, using correct and good shot angles to represent characters in a certain way.

            The only new things that we added to the main task that was not included in the preliminary task was the use of music and the use of transitions.

            This is mainly because the preliminary task required the group to produce a conversation between two characters, meaning that the two things we used in the main task were not essential to making the preliminary task a success.

            The main thing that I realised from completing the preliminary task was who I worked well with and who acted as a distraction or liked to complete the majority of the work without others input. This helped me decide who it was that I wanted to work with in the main task, allowing my skills to be utilised to the best of their ability and to help me shine through when producing the film for the main task.

Feedback to video

We have recieved numerous different emotions and responses that have been felt by the audience of the film.
The majority of the feedback we recieved from our film was positive, saying "the film was well produced and left the audience in suspense and wanting more", this was good as it was the outcome tht we were trying to create in the opening two minutes of this film, mainly because our film was of the mystery genre and was supposed to leave the audience wanting to know more about the letter and its importance.

We did have some people giving us on advice on what could have been improved, for example "the opening could have been longer and created more of a suspense". We took this comment on board, however, there was nothing we could do about the length of the clip as the brief stated it had to be a maximum of 2 minutes including opening titles, and the suspense was not an aspect that we felt needed to be included in the film, as this would be present if the full length film would be produced and that it was not necessary for the opening sequence as this would have meant too much information would have been included and could have confused the audience.

The majority of people said that they would go and watch the film if it was released and would look forward to what the outcome of the letter was and the past of the main characters family holds.

We have taken all the feedback onboard and would take this into consideration when making other films or ccontinuing this film.

Tuesday, 27 March 2012

changes to our project

We are currently editing the that we have previously captured and are finishing off filming the final section of the film.

We have made a few minor changes to the film including where the fades will be placed and for how long they will occur. This is due to the editing of the shots that were originally going to be split up, the shots have been placed together really well, and you can't tell that the section is made up of three different clips. For this reason we thought that it would be a shame to break up the editing and that this would make the clip look jumpy and unprofessional.

We have also added music to the background of our film that we feel is appropriate to the mood and overall feel that we would enable us to give the message of whats happening in the film without using any other sound. We searched through numerous audio discs to find the style of music that suited best. we eventually came to a decision that track 1 from the pastoral disc was most suited and has now been inserted into final cut express to be played alongside our film.

We have changed our storyline slightly for the treatment of the full 120 minute film. Originally the main character Harper was trying to solve the murder in which she uncovers, but now after we have tweaked the storyline, she is related to the people that committed the murder. This makes the storyline make more sense as to why she is trying so desperately to solve the reasons why the murder is committed.

We have also been considering taking out the running section of our film, this is due to the fact that we think it would make the film too long, and would confuse the audience, instead we were considering just doing the montage of shots of the letter being written by Abelard. this decision has not yet been made however, and would depend entirely on the length of the last section of the play.

Overall, we have made numerous changes to our film, although these are only minor changes they still have an effect on the storyline and the way the film will turn out.

Audio

This is the website that we chose our backing track for our film from. 

Editing

This shows the current stage we where at with our editing on 27/03/12

Tuesday, 20 March 2012

Props and costumes photos

The boxes we are going to use.

A different type of box we will use.
The general arrangement of the boxes.

The books we will use.


The letter.

The letter being opened.

The old table the books will be placed on.


Mum's Costume.
Harpers Costume.

Thursday, 15 March 2012